Sunday 29 April 2012

"Once Upon a Time" Flash Fiction entry


As Jamie strolled down the beach the waves lapped at his feet, caressing his bare toes like a girlfriend would.  His right arm ached, the raised fleshy edges of his tattoo still pink and raw.  It would heal by next week, the guy said.   

Sticking out of the sand ahead of him was a wooden post.  A handle, Jamie realised as he got closer. He pulled it several times but nothing happened;  he dropped to his knees and began to dig around its base until his fingers brushed cold metal.

He stood up and gave a final pull, freeing the object.  For a moment he held it aloft then dropped his arms again in shock.  Jamie glanced around and tried to look inconspicuous; no easy feat given he’d just been waving a four foot sword around.

A nearby rock caught his attention. He peered suspiciously into his cocktail glass and then checked again. There was no question about it; sitting on the rock was a genie.  A freaking genie.

“Best put that back” said the genie, examining his fingernails.

 “No way” said Jamie, holding the sword tighter. “I know how this works. I’m not stupid you know.”

The genie looked at the new tattoo on Jamie’s arm; a Chinese character which meant “arm”, and sighed.

 “You’re a genie, right? You owe me three wishes.”

 “Technically, yes. But there are conditions.  No wishing for endless supplies of wishes.”

“How about a wishing tree?” 

The genie rolled his eyes. “No wishing trees. No wishing wells, or magic potions.  Those loopholes were closed down years ago.”

“Fine.  For my first wish....”

 “Something else. Once you let go of that sword, you lose your wishes.  You’re stuck with the thing forever.”

“Wait, I get three wishes and I can keep this sword forever?”

“Yes.  You’ll be forced to.  Good luck getting it through customs.”

“Ah” said Jamie.  “Hadn’t thought of that.”

“Exactly.  Now, if you have no more questions, I’m off.  Once you put the sword back, obviously.”

Jamie sighed.

“OK.”  But I do have one question. What’s the Chinese symbol for ‘genie’?”

Tuesday 24 April 2012

Happy birthday, Luka

My niece, who lives in Australia (which can feel a blinking long way away sometimes) turns one next month.  I still haven't met her, but can't wait until I do.  In the mean time I have written her a story.  Happy birthday, Luka.



The Invisible Thing

 Deep in the jungles of South America, where the waterfalls dance and the warm air smells like coconuts a little girl called Sophie lived with her Dad in a tree-house high above the rainforest.  The house was just big enough for the two of them, and it sat on the widest branch of the tallest tree in the whole jungle.  When Sophie looked out of the window at night she felt like she was right among the stars.  By day when she looked out she could see the rest of the jungle below her, stretching out in every direction like a thick, green blanket.

Sophie’s Dad was a scientist.  It was his job to travel around the world and observe rare and endangered animals.  He would quietly watch them in their natural environments and record what he saw. Then he sent his observations to zoos and museums for other scientists to study.

Even though she lived in the jungle Sophie still had to do her school work.  So every morning she stayed in the tree-house and used a computer to keep up with the rest of her class.  There was a special camera set up in her old classroom, which was over a thousand miles away, and she could watch the lessons and answer questions just like everyone else.  In the afternoons, when her class were doing PE and art and other things she couldn’t join in with, she turned the computer off and helped her Dad with his work.

One bright sunny afternoon she finished her homework and climbed down the rope ladder which hung from a hole in the floor of the tree-house.  She climbed down, down, down through the branches until finally her feet hit the jungle floor.   It was much darker down here, because the tree branches above were so thick and tangled together that hardly any light got through.

She finally found her Dad near a tall banana tree she sometimes liked to climb.  He looked even busier than usual, and was arranging and rearranging a pile of equipment laid out on a big flat rock in front of him.

“What are you hoping to catch today?” she asked.

“Something special” her Dad replied. 

“What sort of something special?”

“I’m not sure yet.  I’ll know it when it comes.”

She looked at the pile of equipment next to him.   Sophie’s Dad had to be very careful not to hurt the animals and so he had all sorts of clever ways of catching them safely. He had different equipment for animals of all shapes and sizes: small nets made from the softest silk to catch things which flew and special sticky paper for catching tiny insects and bigger nets made from jungle vines to throw over elephants and cages made of bamboo for whatever animals might fit in them.

Usually Sophie could tell what he was trying to catch from the equipment he used.  But today he had taken out one of everything, and she couldn’t work out what he was trying to catch.  Sophie was an inquisitive sort of person, and when she wanted to know something it was a bit like having an itch which wouldn’t go away. As she plaited some vines together, she kept on thinking.

“What does your special something look like?” she finally asked.

“No one knows” said Sophie’s Dad. “It’s invisible, you see. But I’ll know when it has arrived.”

Sophie’s eyes grew wide.  The word “invisible” had just been on her spelling list at school so she knew what it meant.

 “If you can’t see it, how will you know it’s here?”

 Sophie’s Dad looked up from his clipboard, with a smile in his eyes. 

“Just because you can’t see something doesn’t mean it’s not there” he said.  “I’ll know when it has come.  You’ll know too.”

Sophie scratched her nose.  “But......how will we know it’s here?” she asked.

“We’ll know” said her Dad, in a voice which told Sophie there was no point in asking any more questions.  “Just wait and see.”

The next day, once Sophie had finished her school work she climbed down the rope ladder, down, down, down through the branches, and when her feet finally reached the jungle floor she went to find her Dad.  He was counting the spots on a thick python which had curled itself around a tree branch.  Once the python had slithered away, waving its tail at Sophie to say goodbye as it went, she asked the question she’d been wondering about all morning.

“Has it come yet?  The invisible thing?” Her shoulders shrunk when her Dad shook his head.

“It will come when it’s ready” he said. I promise.  Just wait and see.”

Three days went by, and still the invisible thing didn’t arrive.  On the fourth morning, Sophie woke up early and decided to pick some fresh bananas for breakfast.  She climbed down the rope ladder, and  instead of climbing all the way to the ground she stopped when she reached the rainforest canopy. Here, the treetops made a bridge, and she leapt from one branch to the next  When she reached the top of the banana tree she picked the two ripest bananas she could find, and put them into her backpack. As she turned around to go back, she noticed something.

She peered through the branches to get a better view.  Below her, sitting on the floor of the rainforest, was a kind of creature she had never seen before. He wasn’t anything special to look at. His fur was a dull, muddy brown colour, and looked a bit like the washing up water did just before Sophie’s dad threw it away.  He didn’t have any stripes, or spots to count.  He wasn’t quite big enough to ride, but he was too big to carry, and he didn't have wings so he couldn’t fly.  In fact, thought Sophie, it didn’t look like he would be able to do much at all.

"Hello" she called. The creature looked up at her with a pair of bright shiny eyes that warmed her like the sunshine did.  Sophie smiled.  She picked another banana, peeled it carefully and threw it down to the creature.  The creature sniffed at it, ate it in one gulp, and then danced around in a circle.  He waved his tail at  Sophie, who laughed and fed him another banana.  This time, after he ate the banana the creature stood on his front paws, as if he were doing a handstand.  Sophie clapped her hands with delight, and picked some more bananas. 

The creature ate four bananas, and did a different trick each time, always waving his tail at the end, and Sophie began to think that the creature was something rather special after all.

When she began to peel a fifth banana the creature gently shook his head, as if to say he’d had enough.  She put the banana into her backpack with the others, and made her way back to the rope ladder.  As she began to climb, the creature waved his tail at her as if to say goodbye.  “I’ll be back soon” Sophie called to him, and then giggled as he did a back flip.

She  climbed back up the ladder to the treehouse, where her Dad was snoring quietly in his hammock.  Just as she was about to wake him up, a flock of parrots flew past the window and did the job for her. 

“Good morning early-bird” he said, as he rubbed his eyes.  “You’re looking very chirpy.  Has the invisible thing arrived?”

Sophie shook her head.  “I don’t think so” she said then added “But I’m still not quite sure how I’d know.” Her Dad laughed.

  “Just because you can’t see something.....”

“Doesn’t mean it’s not there” Sophie finished for him.  “I know.”  She took the bananas out of her backpack.

“I did meet a new creature though” she said, smiling as she remembered.  “He’s very friendly.  And he can do lots of tricks.”

“Hmmm.”  Sophie’s Dad scratched his beard as he ate his banana.  “Perhaps I’ll take a look.  You should come too. It’s still early enough; there’s plenty of time before you need to log on to school.”

They both climbed down the rope-ladder, down down down through the branches and as soon as they appeared through the canopy, the creature, who had been waiting, leapt up into air.   Sophie was glad to see him there and scrambled down the ladder as fast as she could to greet him.

Her Dad joined them a few minutes later.  “Is this the creature you were talking about?” he asked, and Sophie nodded. 

“Isn’t he lovely?” she replied.
Sophie and the creature played together while Sophie’s Dad watched, smiling all the while.  Finally he stopped them.  “Time to go and do your schoolwork” he said to Sophie, whose heart immediately began to sink.  “You two can play together later” he added. “I think I’ll be able to manage without your help for one afternoon.”

“Maybe we could help you look for the invisible thing” Sophie said.

Her Dad smiled.  “Maybe”, her said, as he watched the creature cuddle up to Sophie. “But somehow I think the invisible thing might just be here already.”

Sophie turned to him.  “Really?  It’s here?” her Dad nodded.

“I think so.”

 “Well aren’t you going to put it in a cage? Or cover it with a net?”

Her Dad shook his head.  “Not for now” he said. “Now off you go.  See you this afternoon.”

Sophie gave the creature one last cuddle, and then had a terrible thought.

“What if he’s not here when I come back?”

“I have a feeling he will be” said Sophie’s Dad. “But I’ll keep an eye on him for you.”

"What about the invisible thing?" asked Sophie.  “Will that still be here too?”

"Yes, I think it probably will" said Sophie's dad, scratching the creature's head.

Sophie found it hard to concentrate on her school work that morning.  She got all sorts of sums wrong which she normally knew the answers to and her teacher, Miss Nelson, had to ask the same question three times before Sophie heard her.  When it was finally time to turn her computer off she scrambled down the rope ladder and found the creature waiting for her.  They played together all afternoon, running through the trees and laughing together and eating bananas, and Sophie felt as happy as she could ever remember feeling. 

Evening came, and as the sun went down and the air grew cool, the fireflies came out and danced above their heads like tiny shooting stars.  Sophie’s Dad came to find her.

“It’s time to go home” he said, and Sophie gave a sigh.

 “Goodbye” she whispered to the creature, as she buried her face in its fur. “I’ll come and see you again tomorrow.”

Later that night, Sophie sat in the tree-house, surrounded by stars, and thought about the creature.  She wondered how he was, and what he was doing, and whether he was even there any more.  Then she remembered about the invisible thing, and wondered if that was still there too.  She tried to peer down through the trees to see but they lived up so high it was impossible to see anything at all, not even the tree-tops. The only thing below her was a giant sea of darkness, and Sophie sighed. 

“I wish our house wasn’t quite so high” she said as she climbed onto her Dad's lap, where she liked to sit and listen to stories before it was time for bed. 

“I thought you liked it here” he said.  “Living up among the stars.”

“I do” replied Sophie. But I wish the ground wasn’t quite so far away.  I can’t see my creature from up here.  Do you think he’s still there?” 

"Just because you can't see something, doesn't mean it’s not there”, Sophie’s Dad said quietly. “Or that they're not thinking about you” he added, almost to himself.

Sophie snuggled deeper into her Dad’s lap, and finally understood.

As she slowly began to fall asleep, curled up in her Dad’s lap and surrounded by stars, the invisible thing curled itself around them both too, and gave them an enormous hug.  Even though she couldn’t see it, Sophie knew it was there.  And down in the jungle far, far below, where he’d be waiting for Sophie the very next day, the creature knew it too.